Milly and her birthday and her new horse. (very long)

Once a upon a time there was a girl called Milly and she rode horses until she had a fall from a horse named quince who was a mean rude stallion who would always buck her off.  Milly always wanted her own horse but she never got one because it costs a lot of money and her parents didn't let her.

When her birthday came she ran downstairs and saw lots of gifts. One of her gifts were waiting for her in a barn  and it was a horse and she didn't know its name so milly named the horse magic because it had a pale white body with a golden white Mane and tail.

She also found some riding gear in one of the rooms so she went to her horse and put the riding gear on magic and the riding gear made magic happy and feeling loved before magic came to this barn,people were hitting and whipping her but now she was safe. Before Milly went on a ride with magic,she went to her house to put her new riding clothes on and she was so happy. Before Milly came back she asked her mum and dad to clean magic's  stall while she was riding. They both said yes and they both told her you have to look after magic so she doesn't get ill. So Milly lead Magic to the mounting block before she went on a ride with magic she checked her riding gear and it was fine so she went on the mounting block and mounted onto Magic and then galloped away but before she went galloping her parents told her don't go too far. She went onto a field who belonged to a friend of hers before she went onto the field she had to ask if she could use his field. Milly's  friend Thomas always had let Milly use his field and she always liked how the flowers were all different colours.
Milly asked Magic to go into a trot and magic did what she told. So milly unmounted from Magic and made all the riding gear safe and okay so magic could run around a bit but then the rain came so she had to check all her riding gear and milly couldn't find  a log she could use to get onto and mount magic again but there was no log. Magic lied down and then milly knew what she was doing so she went onto magics back and she went up and put her feet into the footholes  and went to say goodbye to Thomas who was the same age as milly. Milly then went into a trot and then cantered for bit then she went to gallop and went  to home and when she and magic got home,molly went near to the mounting block and got off magic and took his reins and ran into the barn with Magic trotting beside her. Molly took all of magic's tack off and put her into a stall and groomed magic and put her blanket on but before that she hoof picked magic's hooves and then closed the stall door and then put the barn lights on and closed the barn doors. Then milly ran to her house to have a bath and put new clothes on and opened her other gifts and milly went upstairs to do her homework which was her English homework and her maths homework and also she did a drawing of her horse after the rain stopped and the rain finally stopped and milly went to draw a picture of her horse in her stall and magic liked milly's company and every time milly came to see Magic, magic was always over the moon when milly comes and everyone loved milly and magic because they were the best pair!   The end